After passing the Load/Unload Area Hazard Mitigation Strategies to the appendix in F2291, it was decided to look at small wording changes that would improve the text. Several changes are being proposed in this ballot. Several further hazards are proposed to be called out in X9.1. Other changes in X9.1 and X126.96.36.199, aim to insert better wording for the description. In X188.8.131.52, the deletion of the last part of the sentence seems to clarify problems that many had with the personnel that were called out, the use of the word ‘easily’, and a long discussion around the use of the word ‘safety’.